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Re: Would you rather....
deserted island. Would you rather be able to sing beautifully or be able to travel through a mirror to anywhere in the world?
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
Sean, done. Any more Takers??
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Patience
Hi Sean! Finally here. *snug huggles* distracting you, destroying your resilience. Such a revolutionary.. . this breaks the flow of the poem. What does it add to the line? Because ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
this is ch. 7 of the magi. PLEASE REVIEW!
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
ch. 7 of the Magi please review!!!
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {Ch.7}
I know, its been a looonnngg time since I posted. Don't hurt me please! By the way, this chapter was written a looongggg time ago. Seven “Love is patient; love ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Would you rather....
Big bad wolf. Him I could trick... Would you rather, find yourself trapped in the future or the past
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
any more reviews? (requests)
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: The Angel is Busy Fighting a Heavenly War as of Now *closed*
hi! would you please review my poem The writer's pen ?? thanks in advance! ~pointe
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Needs new shoes.
Hi Big brother!!!! *gives huge hug* I have yet another poem to be reviewed. It's called the Writer's Pen. Please review *puppy dog eyes* Loffs, Lil' sis
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: The Writers pen
This was what came out of trying to write a book report. The first word of my book report was Star and that turned into a poem XD Enjoy, ~Loves ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Chapter three
20 questions isn't played like that. Once again I am going to say that this is superfical. Nice chapter though, pointe
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 2
OMG. okay. Call me harsh but I am going to be completly honest. 1. She changes clothes WAY to much 2. this is so superficial I'm sorry. YOu really are ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Chapter one
sorry that was an accident
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Chapter one
hi!!I am here to review! Prologue: I don't think you need to have this. It says something that EVERYONE knows. Ch.1: 1. had him in my 4th block. you mean ...
Jan 30, 2011
