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the way you move your feet when you're trying to go nowhere is a very telling thing

  • Romantic Novels Re: Chapter one

    hi!!I am here to review! Prologue: I don't think you need to have this. It says something that EVERYONE knows. Ch.1: 1. had him in my 4th block. you mean ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Stop and Stare (Part 2)

    hi Skinsy!!! 1)Ohmigosh!!!!!!! I love how at the very end you introduced something to make us think. 2) Wow! if I had just witnessed a murder I would be really ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Stop and Stare (Part 1)

    since everyone already did the nitpicks, I am just going to give my opinions. Wow. As always, your creativity, writing style shines through. 1) Charlie sounds like a girl. I ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*

    Sean done.

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Amore Impossible (Prologue, Chapters 1&2)

    review people review!!!

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Stars

    Hi big brother!!!!!!!!!!!! static glimmers too far whats a static glimmer? to reach for - to hold loves! 'tween aspiration and disbelief. I'm not sure if I like this part. ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*

    Roal done

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: *deleted*

    Hello. Here as requested!! Nitpicks: 1. The boy exited his vehicle as he walked toward the house. He opened the house’s mailbox and placed the letters in. He stared at ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: South America Hates YWS (updated)

    I'm one of those dots of West Virginia!

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: The Review Day Check-In Thread

    umm.. 95 is my goal...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Needs new shoes.

    Hi big brother!!!!!!! Got a poem for you to review. (What kind of sister would I be if I didn't get you out of a pickle?hm? It's called Coal Miner's ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: JART - Jenthura’s Art Request Thread

    okay. I can do that. Thanks

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Match Maker

    nope. Me and whenindoubt . Hands down. And Saks and I are like BFF's. Just sayin'

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]

    This is me Pointe. I know... its a horrible pic

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: JART - Jenthura’s Art Request Thread

    If there is an opening, would you please draw an avie for me? Something mysterious and not to colorful (like silver, and varying blues) yes, thats what I want. Let ...

    Jan 29, 2011


It's been many years since I had such an exemplary vegetable.
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