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Re: Chapter one
hi!!I am here to review! Prologue: I don't think you need to have this. It says something that EVERYONE knows. Ch.1: 1. had him in my 4th block. you mean ...
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Re: Stop and Stare (Part 2)
hi Skinsy!!! 1)Ohmigosh!!!!!!! I love how at the very end you introduced something to make us think. 2) Wow! if I had just witnessed a murder I would be really ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 1)
since everyone already did the nitpicks, I am just going to give my opinions. Wow. As always, your creativity, writing style shines through. 1) Charlie sounds like a girl. I ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
Sean done.
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Amore Impossible (Prologue, Chapters 1&2)
review people review!!!
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Stars
Hi big brother!!!!!!!!!!!! static glimmers too far whats a static glimmer? to reach for - to hold loves! 'tween aspiration and disbelief. I'm not sure if I like this part. ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
Roal done
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: *deleted*
Hello. Here as requested!! Nitpicks: 1. The boy exited his vehicle as he walked toward the house. He opened the house’s mailbox and placed the letters in. He stared at ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: South America Hates YWS (updated)
I'm one of those dots of West Virginia!
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: The Review Day Check-In Thread
umm.. 95 is my goal...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Needs new shoes.
Hi big brother!!!!!!! Got a poem for you to review. (What kind of sister would I be if I didn't get you out of a pickle?hm? It's called Coal Miner's ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: JART - Jenthura’s Art Request Thread
okay. I can do that. Thanks
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Match Maker
nope. Me and whenindoubt . Hands down. And Saks and I are like BFF's. Just sayin'
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
This is me Pointe. I know... its a horrible pic
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: JART - Jenthura’s Art Request Thread
If there is an opening, would you please draw an avie for me? Something mysterious and not to colorful (like silver, and varying blues) yes, thats what I want. Let ...
Jan 29, 2011
