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LadySpark

the way you move your feet when you're trying to go nowhere is a very telling thing

  • Lyric Poetry Re: A reason, A season

    Hi Saks!!!!!!! It's me pointe, here to do a review!!! So its your first attemt at poetry... *strokes beard* I'll go hard on ya' then XD Nitpicks: 1. For poppy's ...

    Jan 25, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*

    Mikko: done!

    Jan 25, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Cartora (Chapter 3)

    Hi Mikko!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! here as requested!! So, I am going to do an overall, then go to our joint account and do nit-picks okay? its a win-win-win! Grammar: Pretty good, I ...

    Jan 25, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Him- A poem

    this is just a poem I wrote, spur of the moment (I know its bad>) Him Who is the one they call Him? The one who broke the Queen’s heart? ...

    Jan 24, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Coal Miner's daughter

    I haven't written poetry in a while, so I may be a little rusty. I am a coal miner's daughter. I grew up in the backwoods of West Virginia. My ...

    Jan 24, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Something in my closet

    Hello! I am Pointe and I will be reviewing you today!!! There's something in my closet, A nd it's growing quite loud , I t giggles and it scratches . ...

    Jan 24, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*

    Tabby Done, any more takers?

    Jan 24, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Forget the World~1

    OHMIGOSH! I love it. I seriously do. The grammar is correct, everything. You got the dialogue correct, and even made it feel believeble. You made me want to scream at ...

    Jan 24, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*

    done! any other takers???

    Jan 23, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Snow- Ch. 3

    This chapter was kind of a struggle for me. i know its not as good as the others XD ~pointe CLUB IS UP! I will give you cookies and milk ...

    Jan 22, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*

    hi Mommmy, new novel (how many times have I said that?) anyway its called Snow and is a twist of the classic snow white this is a link to chapter ...

    Jan 21, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Snow- chapter 2

    Here is chapter 2, I know its short, but I can't decide whats going to happen to make it twisty XD ____ Chapter II: The cool midnight breeze blew across ...

    Jan 21, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Once Again

    Hi! here for your requested review! first of all congrats on the green! thoughts: 1)this could easily be a novel. A very GOOD novel. Consider that.... 2) your choice of ...

    Jan 21, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Would you rather....

    moisturizer. would you rather never be able to read again, or only have 1 person (a person you really hate) to talk to?

    Jan 21, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Snow- Preface and ch. 1

    A twist on the classic tale Snow white. I decided to do a twist on a classic tale and chose my favorite princess, Snow white. No plagrisim intended Preface: My ...

    Jan 20, 2011


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