LadySpark

MUCH BETTER! but there are still a few corrections I have :) the format is hard to read. for example: jack went up the hill with jill Makes it harder ...

Hi! I'm pointe and I am going to review you real quick:) this is the perfect tragic love story (i love those!) and it awesomely written. GOOD JOB! and keep ...

hey I'm pointe and i will be reviewing you today! the first part is fine so I wont even go into it “Mandi, do you want bacon with your eggs?” ...

remember when we stood on the pier, looking out on the water; remember when you held my hand. you whispered in my ear, you said you loved me. remember when, ...

hey! Im pointe and I will be reviewing you today corrections are bolded , comments in red , additions in blue and cancelations in strikeout I wrote this just because ...

thanks for the reviews guys!!!! they helped alot!

hi! I am pointe and I am reviewing you today :) my corrections are bolded my comments in red additions in blue and cancels striked out I never thought this ...

Perfect! it helps ssssiooooo much

oh you guys are soo nice!!! thanks for your reviews!!!

thank you a.s. for your review:)

this is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i absolutly love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hi wicked! okay I am going to review you today :) my corrections are bolded and my comments in red my additions are in blue and the cancelation are marked ...

okay I'm back to apoligize for being so harsh before :) its awesome

thanks guys! BTW chapter 2 is posted as weel soooooooo.... check it out!!!!!!!!!!

hey! looks like I'm your first reviewer! I love it when that happens! okay here is my review (corrections are bolded comments in red Are we infatuated? Or are we ...