Laina

Hey!! Your writing has great flow and the characters are very interesting!! I just have a couple of comments. The wind was pounding the ocean, delivering fists of air that ...

Hey ^^ So I'm new at reviewing stories on here, but hey, it's better than nothing, right? Sorry if I overdo it on the quotes, I just find them handy. ...

This is my first review, so sorry if it's a bit rough. And sorry if I use quotes too much. Okay, so, first, I like this! It's not perfect, but ...