LakeOfCancer

I like this, you provided great detail in such short sentences how mirrors supposedly can't lie. I also like how you said "They can't give us false judgement, They can't ...

This was very good! You provided great imagery for the audience that I'm sure everyone would love. I liked how you described why this man was doing what he did, ...

This is amazing, the only comment I would say is explain why these "people want you". When I read this, I wanted to know what this secret was that you ...

This. Was. Stunning. Like, seriously, I can't tell why I'm not even using exclamation marks.XD Lake here for a review, Pollution is over in the corner, glaring daggers into my ...

Oh. My. GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How do you know to write the way into my heart!? I love how you write all the names of your friends and loved ones. And I'm ...

awwwwwwwwwww.............GRIIIIIIIIIIMMMMMMMMMMMMM........................adorable! Oh, Grim? Do you like me and Pollution? :) If you don't that's ok. And FLUMA I LOVED THIS! I won't call you by your

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLOT TWISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!! I know I haven't actually watched Black Butler yet, but I do know who these

GRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FLUMA HAS DONE THIS FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU PROBABLY APPRECIATE WHAT SHE DID BECAUSE THIS DESCRIBES YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! AND IF YOU DON'T A

I love this because not only do you express in free verse, you also create imagery of what Google does. My favorite line I think, would be "As open-minded as ...

This was so deep, now at first I thought you were talking about a girl that you wanted to be with so badly, but then I realized you had been ...

This is inspiring, honestly it is, and in certain cases, I almost think you're talking about Fluma ;) But anyways, I loved this, I don't have any suggestions for you ...

This was just amazing. I just...wow. This spoke to me deeply, so congratulations. At first, it seemed as if the first boy you had loved treated you fair, but then ...

So, I absolutely love this dude! You provided great detail, which led to amazing imagery, and I loved every moment of it! The only thing I suggest fixing is "'Don't ...

I may not be religious, but the way you described God in His throne and everything about his presence, made me feel as if I was. Excellent word choice too! ...

This...was...FANTASTIC!!!!!!! You provided great detail and imagery, that I actually felt like the speaker. I love how each stanza describes how she changes, from being a light-hearted girl, to being ...