Lalaland

Hey punkrockchick! You reviewed my writing, Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes, so I thought I'd review something of yours. :) Any nit-picks that I would suggest have already been suggested ...

I wasn't planning on writing a second part to this, but a few people asked me to so... here it is! It's quite a lot shorter than the first part. ...

Hey :) This is more of a comment than a review really. I have to say, I really liked this! It was short but I definitely think that it was ...

I love it! 10/10 :)

Heya Skins, could you review this for me please? :D Thank you.

Heya :) This was really great and seriously funny! I love how you've combined all of the different things without making it feel crowded. Well done. :wink: BELLA: Oo… shiny! ...

Hey Kitty Could you review my short story please? Thanks! ~ Lala

Heya ! Could you review my short story for me please? Thanks in advance. ~ Lala

Lalaland here! But you can call me whatever; Lala, la, land, whatever. I actually joined YWS a while ago, but I've only now really started using it! I don't really ...

Yeah... this is bad :lol: By the way, I've made the girl in this nameless on purpose. Anyway, thanks in advance for any reviews! Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes ~ ...

Him I wonder if he's ever told a lie or stretched the truth? If he has, I wonder if that means he's hypocritical. Does he like the elderly or does ...

I listened to the second one, I liked the singers voice! 7/10 Mine is Lostprophets, 4:am forever I like Lostprophets to :)

This was an effective and emotional piece of writing. Well done! :D I'm no good with grammar so I'm not going to comment on that, I'll probably be wrong anyway! ...

This is really cool. :) I can't draw at all so don't take my critique too seriously! I agree that the eyes are a tad bit to big and are ...

I like this! I agree with soul destroyer, you are good considering you've never done it before. You should definete;y post more! This poem has quite storng emotion in it ...