Laminated

Hi there! I like the lyrics, they're abstract but have a very grounded picture in the eyes. First, the line "One hinge of a difference" doesn't seem right to me. ...

Is he going to be wok. This just made me laugh :D Because, of course he isn't going to be a wok, silly. He's a boy! HAHAHAAA.... heh heh. I ...

Thank you SO much for sharing. That was definitely the best thing I've read in a while. I loved your use of imagery (imagery?) here: and meaningless poems, unused condoms ...

This is fantastic. It's refreshing to read a poem in a less wordy format, with so much depth and punch. This poem has a very grabby way to it... I ...

This gives me the creeps. But I suppose that was the point, yes? I LOVE how you wrote this. I liked the use of the word contorted in the first ...

Hullo! I like the story. Greek stuff is super cool. That said, the story of Achilles is difficult to cram into a short story. I would suggest not so much ...

I saw your post in the group, so I followed the link and checked it out and I'm super glad I did! A couple spots I would have worded things ...

Ooohh, I do so like this. I got from this a bittersweet note, which makes me wonder if everything will in fact be fine tomorrow. It seems a little sad ...

Hola:) I must say, this was a pleasure to read. It was very smoothly written and conveyed the point nicely. I like your wording for the most part, and how ...

Well done! The story flows very nicely, and does keep the reader well informed. Judging by my History class last year, all of it is historically accurate. I like the ...

That was beautiful, and I admire your choice to write in Italian. It's a much more musical language than English. What a picture you paint! It changes in my mind, ...

I like this. It's very much my style. The way you wrote it so objectively, with... how to say- unfeeling? comments along the way gave the story a backbone and ...

Hullo! First off, I'll just say that I do so love how flighty this poem feels, since you use a lovely mix of relatively unrelated nouns in it. It adds ...

This poem is beautiful. I love how you expressed sadness in this poem. You used imagery really well throughout, and your word choices were super wise. I did not get ...

Wow. One of the deepest poems I've read in a while. First off, thank you for giving us a look at life inside the darker reaches of the mind, where ...