Laminated

Hello:) This is a great piece. I like the objective view, which is really rare in poetry. Great idea, too. Feelings are fickle things, and you seem to have worded ...

I like it. It has a pretty sound and a nice ring to it. Is the 'You" in the first stanza the same as "she" in the others? For the ...

Fantastic! I love the creative style and your decision to write it in a dialogue. It keeps the poem moving effectively and adds a different, more personal dimension. The mood ...