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Re: i fumble with the keys a lot
Nice. I like.
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: Detachment
Great work!
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Mind over Me
Hot dog, I like this.
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Lady of the Mists
Mysterious, visual, and beautiful. Thanks for sharing!
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: How Not to Lose Your Virginity
BAM.
Aug 9, 2013 -
Re: The Thing About Time - Prologue
That makes much more sense :) As the setting for a character's tale, rather than the background info of a novel, it's good.
Aug 8, 2013 -
Re: Unlocked Puzzle
And that is exactly it's meaning :) Thanks!
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: Weeping Janitors Tell No Lies
Je l'aime.
Aug 1, 2013 -
Re: memoni
Just a comment for now! Usually I like some capitalization, but not in memories. I think your decision to leave it out gives the poem a feel of glancing over ...
Jul 31, 2013 -
Re: Complaint letters to Count Von-Draco about consumption of own babies.
Well and amusingly written. From the sexiest, ;) And one criticism: ...which results in a lack of malnutrition and poverty midst the vampire species... Take out "a lack of." It ...
Jul 25, 2013 -
Re: Timba and James
Hey! Just a quick comment right now, I have a bunch of reviews promised tonight and I'm adding this to the list :) PM me if I forget, would yah? ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: Waxen Mason Jars
This is a beaut. Review to come!
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: It's Not You, but It Isn't Me, Either
Just a comment for today, but I am going to promise you a review when I have a clearer head and more energy. Absolutely Beau-ti-ful. You nailed it. Thanks for ...
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: The White Canvas
Hey! This isn't a review, just a comment... Great job! I liked it a ton, it's well written. But. I know since you set it apart, you probably are proud ...
Jun 25, 2013 -
Re: I promise
Thanks to everyone for reviews and kind words :) I haven't edited the work yet, but I think I will change what you all suggested. Thanks again for the input!
Jun 22, 2013