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Re: Speculation: F58 part 2
The story and concept are interesting. You kept up the level of suspense throughout. The pacing was well done. Also the mystery on whether Jackie was even human or a ...
Aug 10, 2009 -
Re: Just wanted to know what you think.
The stale air of the room was as still as its owner. (There were two people in the room so at the ending at least specify who owned the room) ...
Aug 7, 2009