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It seems like the villain ought to be smart enough not to wear big metal suits next to magnetic death rays, considering the villain built the magnetic death ray. ;) ...

You're very welcome! And that sounds super interesting! :o In case you're interested in my follow-up thoughts, it seems like you can either choose to tell the reader right up ...

Well, how will revealing her gender affect her in-story? Does she live in a society where outing this about herself with potentially harm her? Will she be outcast? Or will ...

I think that poetry can be a great space to develop as a prose writer! It's so different from prose, it pulls from different skills in writing that prose might ...

I have a workshop professor who likes to say that a story is a story so long as it feels like a complete, finished piece. If it carries a complete ...

I'm quite intrigued about a male being called princess! There's an interesting dynamic suggested by this single sentence, and I'd probably read further. Knowing more about the story would gauge ...

"I would quite like to, well, remember things. That would solve a lot of my problems." - Ana(stasia) Where do you go when you want/need to be alone?

Hi Eloquent! Let me see what I can do to help you out here. Ash walks in to his apartment, there are three members of Omnicron 5 there, and they ...

I'm a fan of the second. It's much clearer, and I'm rather fond of the text not interfering with the image. Nice work! Here's my two covers (since I can't ...

Soooo ready! My plot and characters have been itching to get going since May xD

You're awesome

I want this as a poster. Just sayin'. The only thing is the 'D' in 'Wanted' and the 'T' in 'Last' have weird lighter bits to them. I think it ...

Stormy Graves There was actually a girl at my high school who was named that.

A real time video feed transmitted from the south pole. Sometimes you'll see penguins, sometimes you just see snow. Him, Her, and It

A thread like this already exists here . *Locked*