Leahweird

I am so flattered, Chirantha, you made my day! I have fixed that typo (special thanks for catching it, typos are the bane of my existance) and changed that word. ...

“What is it, Mordred?” asked Morgan, pulling me onto her lap. I think I was five, perhaps younger. These events have the diaphonous quality of early memory, but some things ...

This piece has the potential to be really powerful. I liked it, but I think your rhyming scheme is a hindrance more than a help. The first stanza especially has ...

Hello! This is a really neat poem. My favourite line is "live with the candle's friend", although I'm not sure I understand it. At first I was confused. Wouldn't the ...

I don;t have anything constructive to say, I just wanted to tell you how much I liked this piece. It was something really unique, and I love how the reader ...

“What is it, Mordred?” asked Morgan, pulling me into her lap. “Why does King Lot hate me?” I can’t remember why it had been so important to know. I must ...

I love this version of the classic fairytale. I especially love that you managed to give it a believable and well-thought out happy ending. The origional story always bothered me ...

I do love a good story about weres! You even have different kinds of shapeshifter involved, I like that. However, I wan to say that I think you give away ...

I really love the sense of celebration this piece has, even though you bring up a lot of things that are not neccasarily good. I also like how you flow ...

Thank you for your comments! It's good to know I've succeeded in my prelimnary goal, which was to create a dark atmosphere and get people interested in what happened, why, ...

That's great! Now we have enough people, and I don't have to play two characters (which is good, because I haven't done it for a while so I'm out of ...

I know the hill I stand on is naturally a bright, flourishing green, but in the predawn light it looks black. I guess that could be considered appropriate, given the ...

I am really enjoting the story so far. I really love how cocky Ares is. But then he also has those periodic moments of doubt, like when he thought he ...

Hey! I can see you posted this a while back, but I just wanted to say that I thought this was a really interesting piece. Yes it lacks purpose as ...

Wow. I'm not surprised this is a true story. This sounds very,very real. I have nothing to suggest. This piece is perfect as it is.