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That was the cleverest poem I've read in a while. Such an exquisite idea! To treat life as a person and death as another, well that's how I understood it ...

Hey! I liked the concept, love is always fun to mess with in writing. Your structure is spot on, and I knew it would be because of what you mentioned ...

This poem had excellent rhythm to it and a nice personal touch, It's always helpful when you can draw from inspiration, although in this particular case it is terrible. I'll ...

This reminds me of a woman who is suffering from postnatal depression. I like how the face of the song or poem appears simple, but once you really look at ...

Nice work, love the analogies you used. I have to disagree with you about Taylor Swift though, I don't think she is that poetic haha. But that is just my ...

Hey, I like this, it seems you have designed a new type of poem; an essay-poem! And that is OK I guess, it's always good to invent new things. I ...

Hi, This is a good story, but it could've been a lot better. I fin the second point of view storytelling quite confusing and also, the first part of the ...

This is undoubtedly the most brilliant poem I have read so far on this website. I am truly touched by the delicate words and metaphors you incorporated into this poem. ...

Hi, this poem of yours sums up realising you have feelings for someone close to you, really well. Reading this made me feel as if I was being punched in ...

I was immediately engaged into your prologue. I cannot wait to read what else you have in store for us! I love the mystery in this prologue, you keep us ...

How annoying it is to not know what someone close to you i thinking! Well sometimes anyway, haha. Firstly, I'd like to commend you on how you repeat the first ...

This was a good poem, I liked how you were drilling the audience with the question " Why did you open my diary?" over and over. It added a bit ...

Hi, this is a good story, but there are quite a few grammatical mistakes which are frustrating and distracting. I don't know if you prove read this, but if you ...

Wow. This is a highly tragic piece, but a fairly realistic account of what domestic violence may bring, in the most extreme cases. You captured the pain that abuse can ...

This is really well written, but it's not a short story. It's a poem! But that aside, it's a good poem which expresses the need for change really well, but ...