Leja

I liked the first two lines! Very not what I'd expect them to be, and I like that. Unfortunately, I can't say the same about the rest of the poem. ...

Granted, only when she's talking about boring things. I wish the weekend were three days instead of only two!

He can’t shout unless he’s inarticulate though. You might want to rephrase this; it seems to contradict itself with the word "inarticulate". But he never shouts. He never raises his ...

Bella (>_>), Edward (^_^) or Jacob (=P) Haha, I love your smiley classifications! But yes, you're right, it's a book for the romantics XD

lyrical_sunshine, if anyone's too critical of Stephenie Meyer, it's me; don't worry about it XD I thought it was a big block away from the rest of the plot, which ...

I think you should concentrate on connecting things a bit more. Right now, it seems like a lot of one-line random sentences (often cliches) strung together. Why mention the sunrises ...

Can you blame me for hoping?

This works well as a short story, I think because it's in the present tense. However, a byproduct of writing in the present tense can often be lofty, thoughtful writing ...

"Yes, when properly executed, revenge can be very... satisfying." -Bao "Well, I don't know about that. What kind of revenge are we talking about here? The putting soap in someone's ...

So the other day I went to the store and picked out an avocado and then, guess what, I ate teh avocado and it was wonderful and delicious and then ...

I Hate Men- Kiss Me Kate

Do you think we need a treasure map to find the bucket?

Where did you leave it last?

Dameon Over-controlling teenage girl in alternate world; one minute will be skipping around in a starched tea party dress, the next minute will be karate-chopping someone's head.

Makes me think of a big teddy bear! haha, apparently I've completely disregarded the "Bad" of the middle word XD