Leja

*claps for the new dragon recruits* :P My dragon is bigger and scarier than your monkey so I win! hahaha!

Somewhere in the 9000s, and still trying to catch up from my four to five days of nothingness last week XD

Nice job gadi; congratulations!

You've described this world around you, now I want to know what makes it special. What gives it the "My" world from the title? If I stood in the same ...

In general, it was alright. But there were vague parts that I thought could be a little more specific: "Blinding my senses" Which senses are being blinded? How (I'm not ...

Eh, no. Dragons all the way! Yay for Horace!

Considering that my penguin has never visited Aunt Petunia, I decided to bake brownies and cakes. My best attempt

Agh! *procrastinates* I think... I shall show my frustration with @ signs: @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ *

Some of the lines were a little too long to keep both the rhythm and the rhyme. Ex: "Softly, together, waiting for [s]the[/s] dark" and "These moments I shall strive ...

I'm not sure about the old man in the beginning: who he is, or what is his significance. And I'm not sure what "does enough shining" means. In the second ...

I think alot of it is done in Photoshop or some deviation thereof, but I've never made one, so I don't know exactly.

(you might want to run a spell check on this) The and/but thing didn't really work because it almost seemed like they were refuting each other, so were contradicting a ...

The repetition got old fast, especially because it ends up being a good third of the poem. What I liked was that this poem went somewhere: it began with (and ...

Ooh, I like the title. Content = loveliness. So I shall nitpick word choice ^_^ The rose turned yellow, then [Seems like an unnecessary word and almost makes this first ...

flying machine! (^ And yes, I believe you've spelled it correctly)