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Thank you ;)

I hope I've not left out any mistakes, as I have edited my poem.

I hope I've not left out any mistakes, as I have edited my poem.

I hope I've not left out any mistakes, as I have edited my poem.

I've edited the poem. I hope there are no mistakes I've missed out. ;)

I picked up everything you said and I've decided to change it slightly based on the feedback everyone's given me. I'm going to re-publish it, so it's improved. :D

Oh, my inspiration for this poem. There really wasn't one. It was just something that came to mind.

:D

Thanks Brie. Geez, I say thanks too much.

THANKS SO MUCH!! I love the feedback. Thank you. I noticed the commas as well. There were a few typos, I think. Thanks for the little moving message at the ...

The first sentence kind of doesn't make sense. I meant that her hair cascaded down her back, not the chopsticks. Lol. I hope you're not confused by that.

Wow! Seriously, thank you. I'm glad you liked it ! :D

Thanks for the feedback, I never though of what you said, which is good. Once again, thanks. :D

You're welcome :D

You're welcome :D