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LeonieLacey

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Reminiscence

    Hi! Thanks everyone for the reviews! Storyweaver,i see what you mean about that wording and the word 'red'...kinda off; thanks for pointing it out, i'll think about this one and ...

    Nov 16, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Reminiscence

    Those lines on your face, laced and weaved into drooping skin, tell a thousand stories. In your house, in this old room I wonder why I left this place, or ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Double Bass

    Hi lilymoore,thank you for reviewing this. In response to your first point, i agree with you about it because i didnt realise that before. However, i think that if i ...

    May 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Double Bass

    Thanks everybody! Hi Solvalery, yes, you're right, I love my Cello. I've only been playing it for a few months, but its great, i love all string instruments really. I ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Double Bass

    How was I to know, That a gentle, swift stroke Of your bow would make me Fall deeply in love? At a time when my future was all planned out, ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Untitled

    Wow really good for a first poem...especially like the ending. Well done!!

    May 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Widow's Voice

    Thank you Green Eyes, thats very nice of you, I appreciate it :)

    Feb 12, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Widow's Voice

    Washing dishes one lonely day, You heard a whisper; Somebody called your name. From your heart, you felt it And you turned quickly, Dropping a plate. Smash! It hit the ...

    Feb 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: In My Nearly Empty Diary

    Thank you, Tariq Muhammad, for the review, I appreciate it very much. I understand what you mean by the 'possibly mistaken non-mistakes' and I will make some changes. Again, thanks, ...

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: In My Nearly Empty Diary

    Yeah, it must have taken you ages to write out all those GEORGES'. Not that you didn't enjoy it for KEVIN, I give no comment. I think you know what ...

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: In My Nearly Empty Diary

    What I dread the most, Is forgetting about you When I've left this school. I won't be going far, But to me, we'll be worlds away. I'll lie on my ...

    Nov 2, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Pain.

    Haha, i told you this was enough to make a poem! God, well i guess i should review this poem seeing as i'm the first one reading it. But i ...

    Oct 28, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: School Romance?

    Thanks pazey13, i'm glad that people can relate to this poem, i got the idea from a book talking about the difference between love and infatuation, and the rest just ...

    Oct 26, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: School Romance?

    You can deny it all you like Leonie, but the truth is *Sings* YOU WANT TO LOVE HIM! YOU WANT TO KISS HIM! YOU WANT TO HUG HIM! *Sings* Muhahaha!! ...

    Oct 25, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: School Romance?

    WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! I love this one! Was it Goulash that inspired you ;] ? Hah! But seriously I do love this poem!! Upload the one about No mans land! Chynel. Not ...

    Oct 24, 2010


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein