LerajeAnguis

From the very beginning, I was thinking that the main character sounded highly intelligent. My next thought was about his age. You answered both of those thoughts pretty quickly by ...

There's one part that really stuck out at me. The line goes "So this was the end then, a death by cleaning robot." I like the way you showed how ...

I was asked if this is a review. In all honesty, it is more of a nitpick. In your fifth paragraph, that is not counting the salutation, you misspelled courtesy. ...