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Re: Werewolves
Here's some paragraphs describing my character after the Prologue. If it doesn;t fit in the actual story, please tell me. Asilan slammed the door shut to his room and fell ...
Oct 9, 2007 -
Re: Werewolves
Ok, I made a prologue as a lot of people suggested and I also removed the middle part to Chapter 1. The last part of the prologue is just a ...
Oct 9, 2007 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2.0
"How some people who cause to much trouble to be by themselves," Lethero said. Volcana laughed her deep laugh. "Always hanging out with the troublemakers are you?" "Well, anyway, you ...
Oct 9, 2007 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2.0
"Sounds familiar," Lethero said. "It should," Laney said. "The Priests, remember those. The thing our ancestors fought." "Dammit, that thing?" "Yeah." "What you two talking about?" Dargon asked." "A r
Oct 9, 2007 -
Re: Werewolves
I would add the Prologue but it seems whenever I tried to make it I couldn't get it correct. So I started with my original beginning. I'll try to make ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: Werewolves
This ain't the full chapter, I'll add it part by part. Chapter 1-Asilan Asilan walked into the darkness of the kitchen. He flipped a switch and saw his mother sitting ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2.0
*yes you can still join ceiling*
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2.0
Lethero shot a bullet into the gut of a human who was running towards him. Then in the distance someone shouted "Retreat." And all the humans turned and fled. Senna ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2.0
Lethero quickly jumped to his feet and took a human near him. He pulled out his gun a nd fired shots into the enemy, but suddenly the dreadful sound of ...
Oct 4, 2007 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2.0
"Dammit," Lethero said, "I ain't leaving anyone behind. Running back to where he came from while drawing his wrist blades. When Lethero came to the clearing he found the remains ...
Oct 3, 2007 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2.0
"Here up Dargon," Lethero said around the room. His gun was in his hand at this time and all his senses were on high alert. "I'm almost done," Dargon said ...
Oct 2, 2007 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2.0
Lethero took out his gun and shot in front of Aro. "Stop!" he yelled. "Just because she's a human doesn't mean you can attack her." "You mean you can still ...
Oct 1, 2007 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2.0
Lethero stood up as he sensed a foriegn presences. "What is it?" Laney asked. Lethero walked forward and instantly his ears perked. "Duck!" he shouted as he fell to his ...
Sep 27, 2007 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2.0
Lethero stood with his back to the wall gun drawn. He looked over the corner. "This way is clear," he said into his mouthpiece. He snuck around the corner opened ...
Sep 27, 2007 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2.0
You might think of Mythical Creatures of Sada 2 but it's not. This hundreds of years into the future to where we have hover cars and all that stuff. You ...
Sep 26, 2007
