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Thank you to all who reviewed this. I got the paper back recently and got a 98% :D. My teacher said I know how to write a story.

I am going to make this Chapter an ender to Chapter 1.

Here's the rest of Chapter 1. Asilan stood up and turned up and turned on his radio which played music loud enough to be heard by his mother downstairs. Teropa ...

Here's some paragraphs describing my character after the Prologue. If it doesn;t fit in the actual story, please tell me. Asilan slammed the door shut to his room and fell ...

I would add the Prologue but it seems whenever I tried to make it I couldn't get it correct. So I started with my original beginning. I'll try to make ...

Before anyone says anything else on detail I need to say a few things. This was a Essay and I only had story to work off in my English book ...

Here's the entire story, if you see any problems in this that I missed please tell me. It's due this Wednesday. This story is told by many people, in different ...

This story is told by many people, in different country, and in different tongues. The story tells of bravery and cruelty. It shows that even men that can be as ...

Here is more of the story. Then when Polydectes had a party called on for him and his, soon-to-be, wife. And there is where Perseus announced, “I did not bring ...

Here's some more. Morning came with no hope of being saved by anyone. The sea was a flat and empty expanse of water in every direction. Then Posiden, God of ...

It was good. Killing off a person we don't know. I will look for the other posts,

“Who is it,” came a voice from inside when I knocked at the door. “It’s me,” I replied. “Ok,” said the voice becoming more serious. The door opened reveling my ...

It was good, doesn't seem fantasy, but I think you're still getting to that. It has a air of mystery to it.

Geedo was gone for hours, but I hardly noticed: the image of Scado dying played in my over and over. When Geedo went to pick me up, I fell to ...

Good, but as always check the capitilization, but anywhooo, it's getting more intresting. :)