Lethero

It's good first to chapters (or parts) make sure you capitilize at the right areas.

The last part is a mess up. Dragons will always be in our dreams told in countless stories and will truly real to those who believe.

I agree with the others on what they said, and I also agree that you should try to make it longer (I like long chapters). I will look for it ...

Please if you're reading this please critique. I can only make this an awsmoe story with a few of your suggestions.

But I knew Scado wasn’t going without a fight. He dropped into a Lycan fighting stance, commonly all four paws, and he started a deep threatening growl which might have ...

Please if you are reading this I seriuosly need you to critique this if you find mistakes. *gets on knees and beggs* please I beg you.

Good story but try to keep it away from going into the Eragon story line with Saphira. But any way it was a good story you should continue (I wish ...

We found Scado later in Geedo’s house, Geedo said he’d deal with Scado and help him calm down and send him back. He came back but he never looked Nicarga ...

Lycanthropy Chapter 1 My muscles tensed , I took a quick look around and saw people carrying torches. I kept on hiding up on a sturdy branch. Trying not make ...

I'm working on Chapter 2 so it should be out soon.

Im no longer working on this see Lycanthropy the one I'm working on.

A sorry to Chibi didn't see you're post and the name before I posted it. I promise it isn't anything like yours. I try to find a different name.

Good story like. Can't what to read more. You should continue and if you stick to a good story you would make a good author

Sory about the mistakes changed them in my orignal document. It was about Midnight when I wrote this so i didn't catch the changes straight away, can you blame me.

So no one gets confused this is a kind of flash back to the Markus Flint in the future. Also Im going to give him demonic powers [not given anything ...