Lightsong

7/10 It is intriguing in the sense that it implies for an explanation of how it feels to be born, but lack a focus in a form of a main ...

*flips table* I can't make any more limerick after the first one. D: Not to mention I don't think I can win after reading all those submitted limericks. ;-; Oh ...

7/10. This sentence can be interpreted in many ways. My first thought was Nex's a doctor, but my second was assassin. Interesting in either ways. Good job. Oh, and the ...

If only I can submit multiple entries. Limericks are fun to make. =)

Revenge of the Papers There once was a boy name Justin who threw papers into the dustbin. He cried, he was in vain. A tree grew after the rain and ...

Well, I would say, 'Throw in interesting events! Make conflicts!' because that's the easy way to develop characters, since they would be making hard decisions and change over time. Also, ...

Congrats guys! :D

What is 'drive'? Noob RPer here ._.

Ah, it works for me now. Interesting story you have there. ;) And I finally submit mine when I thought the original one was trash. Now, hands held up.

Optimistic Today, the scorching sun became a Pluto, ignored. The thought of getting the things out of the store, the effort to do that, didn’t disturb him. The gas cylinder ...

I can't check the link to short story. ;-;

So many submissions! @Carlito would be busy. xD

Unwanted eggs dumped in the dustbin.

Yeah, I think you should start with Brianna. From her perspective, you can introduce the conflict and all.

I've been persuaded. Sign me up! :D