LilPWilly

Yes lol I write music, and just use garage band for the rest. I followed you on SoundCloud. I took down my music too, cause in the takes i was ...

I think that%u2019s my cursor loll Thanks! Yeah, I considered adding more, but I wrote this as if I would give it to her, but we both know that probably ...

Thanks a bundle! Idk if I%u2019ll update it, but the least I can do is explain my thoughts. The seventh paragraph is literal, I actually ran to her house every ...

Thanks a bundle! Idk if I%u2019ll update it, but the least I can do is explain my thoughts. The seventh paragraph is literal, I actually ran to her house every ...

Ofc. it%u2019s a really good song, and your voice sounds cool, and somehow just how I imagined it loll. I love sad slowish guitar songs like this, and your melodies ...

This is really good. My only advice is make the last line less ambiguous, maybe “‘cause I still love you” or “do you want it too?” I especially like the ...

Hey, this is great. And heartbreaking lol One minor edit: I believe you meant ‘red stained cloth’. I love the visuals, the mystery, the emotion. Oof The flowers imagery is ...

Cool poem. I like the quilt bit.

‘Poetry: General, General’ Loll

I like how it ends with the repeating phrase. I like how simple this is. This reminds me of the mercy that my loved ones have shown me, so thank ...

Beautiful.

Dang this is so good, I have never read something so raw and relatable about body image. Please keep writing this, for all our sakes.

Great stuff illy! Did you take this from a particular event in history?

I’m dead

The line about the book is a big clue..