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LilySoulMahon

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Eyes have fooled the heart before

    Wow, I loved this piece of poetry. The structure was well done and it kept me reading and didnt let my mind wander. You used detail well and I felt ...

    Jan 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Love II (Rebellion)

    I liked this. Its a strong emotional piece. Its also short and sweet. Kept me reading though I did gain a little bit of confusion at the begining but once ...

    Jan 10, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: My Girls

    Once again beautiful pictures! :) They have really vibrant colouring and the detail in the faces is simple yet it shows a great deal of emotion. I especially liked Claire ...

    Jan 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: To Fall Beneath One's Shadow

    Wow, a really emotional piece of poetry. The imagery is strong and I actually really enjoyed the structure that in the end was used as it felt to me to ...

    Jan 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: You Have Your God

    Wow, I really like this piece. Its really detailed and emotional. I can feel how the begger feels and the ignorance of the people who walk past. What you have ...

    Jan 10, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Avenger comic teaser

    Its a cool use of imagery but I didnt really understand what was happening, it lacked detail. I think you need explain your idea more in the text and imagery, ...

    Jan 10, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Are You Ready To Die? (Linked to Beautiful Yet Sinister)

    Hope you like this. I have slightly linked it to Beautiful Yet Sinister, though it wont be clear in the beginning. And if you get confused by the last line, ...

    Jan 10, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Sketch Work

    CORRECTED :D

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Sketch Work

    THATS cause my net messed up how do i delete it???

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Sketch Work

    Hope you like these Sketches. The Camera is Rubbish so you may not be able to see any of the details but I hope you like them :)

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Winter Skies

    A beautiful piece of poetry. I loved the imagery of it. Made me smile though it was quite dark. Structure was also good though I do think a little bit ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: One of my drawing things

    I really like this, the colouring is sooo vibrant. I also love the facial expression, it looks like me when im listening to music but a boy :D haha. I ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Deanna

    Beautiful! Amazing! Awesome! Wow! :D I love the colouring, you didnt go overboard, you kept it simple. And the eyes are superb. A really good drawing. Though I do think ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Jackelyn

    Awwww shes adorable :) The photography is really good, I love the lighting. The eyes are good. You have a real talent seriously :) Makes me smile. Haha. I also ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Guided (Introduction)

    I started writing this ages back and its been something that i've been expanding on for actually quite a few years in my head. Tell me what you think about ...

    Jan 9, 2011


“Such nonsense!" declared Dr Greysteel. "Whoever heard of cats doing anything useful!" "Except for staring at one in a supercilious manner," said Strange. "That has a sort of moral usefulness, I suppose, in making one feel uncomfortable and encouraging sober reflection upon one's imperfections.”
— Susanna Clarke, Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell