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Hey! This is really nice and interesting so far! I love the way you started it. It made me want to read more :D There we're a couple of things ...

I'm in love with the hunger games! I'm glad I found this. Anyways, It was great! But, i have a couple of tips. You said: Said a lot...For example, Haymitch ...

I love the hunger games and I'm so glad I found a fan-fiction about it! It's really great so far and I love the idea of Haymitch's games. It was ...

I love glee! I'm so glad you made a fan-fiction about it. A few tips though, you said that Quinn whipped her hair at Rachel multiple times. Maybe you could ...

This is very good but, you should try to tell more of a story. I love the message you wrote about and it's very true and original. Also, I found ...

Truly, Great! Again, it's very detailed and very interesting. I caught one thing though. It was realer than ever I'm not sure realer is a word...But you could try saying ...

This is so amazing! And very true. I love poems that tell a story. The rhymes we're great and made it more interesting but, there we're a couple of words ...

This is really good! Very interesting. I have a few suggestions though. At the end of the chapter you kind of just cut off. You should try maybe adding some ...

This is really interesting and you put a lot of detail in it! Keep up the good work! I did notice something though, Of course I elected to stay with ...