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Re: Hospital Calamities
I really like it! It was very fun to read But then again it was kinda sad:D Very nice use of onomatopoeia!
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: The Unwanted ( Chapter one )
Thanks Writteninstone! I mentioned that she has jet black hair in there. But, yeah I know what you saying. I'll keep your suggestions in mind! Thanks again!
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: I Am The Mockingjay ( Prologue and First chapter )
Thanks for the reply Narniafreak! Yeah it's a bit confusing in the beginning and nothing really happens but, as the story goes on everything starts to make sense because I ...
Apr 22, 2011