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I just seen Loki. Loves the Loki. The Loki is loved.

I want to make my readers suffer with that cliff-hanger! *evil laughter* I have Chapter Two out, so that says who the character is.

Thank you for the advice~!

Fade said "damn" in the first chapter, so it's referring to that. According to Axel, it's a swear. But thanks for the spelling checks and all that. ^-^

Thanks. ^-^ The first chapter ended with, "W-who are you?!" so I kind of just started from there.

Thanks so much! I love the support and help the people ln this site give.

Thank you!

Thanks! Yeah. I'm just starting out, so I'm learning how to make my stories better. And this certainly helps. ^-^

You are getting really good, Hiddencities. ;) However, I advise that you check spelling and grammar in the future. I really want to know what happens next, and that's good! ...