Lionhero333

Ulyana!! Thank you so much for this. I was smiling reading your response because you caught so much of what I hoped would sit underneath the chapter without being stated ...

I appreciate the honesty. The only pushback I would give is the prose and all that is for sure on purpose. If its too flowery or too poetic or something ...

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Once again. Great chapter😁

Thank you for the review%uD83E%uDD13 I really appreciate it.

Thanks I really appreciate it

Thanks for the review, really. I have some other work too if you want to look at them.

Thank you so much. I actually have a few chapters og my fantasy novel, SEEKERZ posted if you want to look at those. Once again thank you for any feedback ...

Really good work. Can you check out mines

Really good work. Can you check out mines

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wohey loved it truely did, your poerty freakishly describes my life a little to well :) the soft sound of a computer dying made me think of you. ----> An ...

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wohey loved it truely did, your poerty freakishly describes my life a little to well :) the soft sound of a computer dying made me think of you. ----> An ...

I really like the pre chorus. It sounds like something I would say. Nice Job, Chevy.Atomic Number 50....would be Tin. What's the significance of tin? Am I looking too much ...

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