LisaMCooper

There really isn't much to be said, as any problems were already pointed out. But, I very much agree with everyone that has posted before me. This piece was beautifully ...

My old tattered black jacket lay across your waist and your clothes are ruffled as though you rolled over. Did you mean jacket? :) I loved this by the way. ...

Hullo! *waves* I really liked this and the way you wrote it. I would love to read more and while there isn't much I found that might need editing or ...

I remember writing this when I was twelve. :)) Shadowed Girl I’m a shadowed girl-- Too timid to show all that I’ve got Too shy to let them know me ...

Wow! Just absolutely wow! I mean, really, that's all I can say! Other than that I loved it! Though I will also say that I agree with the people that ...

I really don't think there's much to say besides wow! Absolutely wow! I loved it! This was wonderful, and dfinitely a twist on the more mainstream vampyre stories. Plus, you ...

Wow.. that's all I can say really. Wow. That is... wow. That is amazing. Though I did spot a few grammar and spelling errors. But hey, everyone makes mistakes. Anyways, ...

I liked it. I really did. Why? Well... Mainly because... it was really awesome. And really engaging. I didn't find much wrong with it. Though that closing sentence was kind ...

I don't know why people had problems with this. I thought it was brilliant. Of course, I can understand most anything if I put my mind to it. Brilliant work ...

Hiya! ^^ My name's Lisa and I would like to leave you a review. Okay. Your story was a bit confusing. But that's alright. I do that too. Also, there ...

I say wow and congrats on your courage to post this. I don't understand why so many people are getting upset. You already said you didn't want to offend anybody, ...

Hi, I've been reading your fanfiction. And I like it. I noticed in some of the earlier chapters, there were a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes. But hey, we ...

Wow. I really liked this. Your sentences flow really nicely and you get in enough description for good imagery. A few grammatical errors, but nothing major. Plus, I believe (and ...

Okay. I myself, got really confused. For one thing, when you wrote the rape scene, you should have clarified that it was a vision. Why? Well, when I first read ...

Wow. Really, really good. I would never be able to come with something like that. ^^ Most of what I would say has already been said. But, I will say ...