LittleMiss

I liked it... but... Why did it only rhyme for the first few lines? I liked the rhyming, and then it disappeared! Also, there should probably be quotation marks here: ...

I'm not really one to judge lyrics (I'm a short-story and novel writer) but this seemed pretty good! I judged it from a poem-standard, because I know a little about ...

This was pretty cute! I liked it... and it seemed to have good fluency. One thing that popped out at me though, "Not what you want to have to choose ...