Littlewing

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Thank you! :)

I have seen other reviewers quoting from the text, but I can't see any buttons at all when I am writing a review. Thanks! :)

Hello! I liked the bare, severe feel of your poem - I feel that you increase the emotion in the poem by not over-ornamenting it. A few spelling errors: 'distrought' ...

Great poem :) I love the description and imagery in the second stanza, however I also feel it stands out a bit from the rest - being longer and having ...

Well done - this is a nice piece of writing! I agree with the previous reviewer that there a quite a few grammatical errors, which would be worthwhile correcting. As ...

On reflection, I'm thinking it's a bit overwritten and flowery... Oh well. Thank you for replying!

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Hello, I'm Robyn! I'm new... so I thought I'd say hello. As of yet, I have nothing posted, but not for long :wink: !