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I have to say I love your writing and ideas, if it's yours. I'm not trying to mean or anything, but have you ever read The House of Night series? ...

Let me just say that I loved that you did a gay love story. I hate people that freak out over it, because you can't tell someone who to love, ...

This was really good. I'm not going to nitpick, so no worries. I leave that in the hands of the pros. Don't have much to say other than that. Just ...

Liz is such a bad, bad girl. Lol. I like that all she could feel was guilt about what just happened. The story was really good, there's nothing to ask, ...

First I have to say that I was so scared for Lillah. I love your story and want to cry every time it ends. This is amazing in every way ...

Wow. This was pretty interesting. It was good, no doubt. And very different. I loved reading your story, because it was so well written. But there is some work. Nitpicking, ...

I really liked your piece, it was sad and sweet. The only thing I would say needs some improvement is maybe a little back ground. Why does she love him? ...

I'd your story up to "your beautiful." You have to be a little more realistic. Most guys don't just go up to a random girl and tell her she's beautiful. ...

I like the story. And in some small way I understand too. I mean I'm a year away from being 16,but every year since I was like 12 I thought ...

Don't delete it. It's a good story and even though someone told you should change some stuff in it doesn't make it bad. I liked it. I agree that you ...

I really liked your story, but there is one thing that kind of bothers me. The fight with Aaron and Toby. I think you should have had them try to ...

I really like the poem just for thhe fact that it shows what someone is thinking about before they cut themselfs and i never understood why people do that. Anyways ...