Livia

Hey there! I have to say, I really liked the way you wrote this piece. I think it's the shorter sentences that I really thought were great. Keep those up! ...

One thing I really like about this piece is the description. It's very colorful and varying. I feel like I'm there for most of your story. The same can be ...

Lol, I love this piece! I must show this to my friends, they could learn. :lol: You see, my friend, it’s all very well Maybe instead of "it's all very ...