Livinginfantasy

I'm finally here! I'm so sorry I didn't come earlier, I usually ignore messages... please don't eat me! Comments/Suggestions in red. 1. COMMENTS AND SUGESSTIONS ok no complaining for where ...

Sometimes I get a really cool title in my head and devlop a poem around that. Others it's a general idea or theme and then there's always the times when ...

haha! I'm jumping in! ^^ A super cool chick with feline features/characteristics LivingInFantasy

Banned for banning with two reasons.

First, I must say: That was an amazing title! I love it. After re-reading a couple times, I finally got it! I really don't have much of a critique, I ...

First, please capitalize your I's, even if it's just in a message on the top of the real post (pet peeve of mine). Second, this isn't really a poem. It's ...

I'd like you to review something of mine! Bored Please, with sugar lumps on top? :D

Love the title! Okay, this is not sucky! Oh yeah, like everyone said, it could use some work, but it's a diamond in the rough. I suggest adding some length ...

The title might be a little too strong, but alas. :P ....... MY POETRY IS SHIT! Some say that my poetry, lacks consistency - but I don't share this view. ...

'Cause they're depressed. Do blind people see in their dreams?

Banned for banning her with something I already banned her for.

Banned for making me laugh.

Banned for having a frame in your avvie.

Banned for banning her and her dancing Spider-Man.

Banned for making me feel bad! (boo hoo, I made you sickened!) JK