Logan15

Hi! First off, this is a really good idea you have here! I like the way you start this out by describing something that the character likes. I also love ...

I love this! The first thing I want to say is that I love how you described Edward's father; it was very realistic, and I got a clear image of ...

First off, this is absolutely beautiful. I love the creativity of putting the hurt of a past relationship into the form of a recipe. I really love how all of ...

This is so adorable!! First off, I love the idea of proposing with a poem. It's so romantic, especially if you're really into literature. Second, it made me realize how ...

I love how this was animated. I especially love the part where 'laugh' changed colors. That really brought a lot of attention to the word. I like the part asking ...

There's so much emotion in this! I want more! I really like the premise of it being all about the things you can't achieve and your failures. This poem is ...

There is a lot of meaning in the poem. I think it just needs a little more detail, but it's still fine without it. It's a good poem; some adjustments ...

Wow. I feel really called out by this because I do this a lot. It's a simple poem, but it has the ability to get its point across really easily ...

(Whoops... I accidentally clicked the submit button before I typed anything...) Continuing on... You really put a lot of effort into this! And none of that effort was anywhere near ...