Lollipop

Great Emma, you won't get a lot of critz for this because it's so good! :P

It's good but it is a little short.SORRY i'm being to harsh! :cry:

Well done Emma! I love them all but the second one's my favourite! :lol: :lol: :lol:

Wow Emma, you've got such a talent. Your poetic mind touches my soul.*See I can be poetic too* HEEHEE! :wink:

But I am crap at poems Emma, wait till you see my artwork .MWAHAHAHAHA!

Good, good, good!

Good. You use your description very well. :D Hee Hee ~Lollipop~

I thought this poem was very good. It was disgusting :lol: Well done!

I thought this was a good poem but didn't really capture my attention. What am I saying, my poems are crap! :cry:

I guess your right! Yeah! hyper! :P

Why are we all going mad?

Wow guys thanx for all your comments. Pleased to hear them! :lol:

HAHAHAHA, erm? I just went hyper! hehe! :lol:

I think your title is good and your poem is very good and descriptive, keep it up, you've definitely got a talent! :D :D :D

Here we go! I don't know why I wrote this poem. I wrote from a person who's dying's point of view. Stand Standing on the rim of hell Waiting to ...