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*Thanks for the help Kyllorac. I'm finally in a good position to write it all as I wish.* Plot Summary: When a domestic terrorist attack in Chicago reveals the existence ...

YWS Trading Cards... how would that even work?

Don't be silly Yurri, King Kong isn't a monkey! Nice point Demeter. What is SPEW, Snoink?

Question: Why does Nate like monkeys so much?

Heya. This poem was really short so there's not much to review. Here's two cents: Inject some more personal emotion into it. Well, thanks for the read!

*Insert rude word here* I wrote this awesome review and now it's gone! *Sigh* Alright, let's get into it. Basically what I wanted to say was that if you want ...

Heya, I'm TheNewHero and I'm Heeer(o) to review your poem. I'll start with just a few key points: The repetition was clearly visible and while it didn't necessarily hurt the ...

Hey! It's you! With the awesome avatar! You have good rhyming skills. I feel you should have drawn much more difference between the two stanzas. Perhaps the first could be ...

To quote Helena from A Midsummer Night's Dream: If only your frowns could teach my smiles.

Well to add to what Griffin and Persephoneia have said, I think you should describe your friend's sadness a little more. The poem also repeats a lot. I think the ...

Griffin, you beat me to the cut! Curses, I can only echo your words now. *Echoes Griffin's Words* And to add: While I understand it's very poetic and helps the ...

You won't believe what I'm about to say... ... but the aliens ARE here! ... but I'm a superhero. ... but you're all in danger! ... but the earth is ...

Great poem. I like the ending best (In a non-insulting way :P) I think there was a bit too much repetition. Generally if you can see words being repeated even ...

9.9/10 - Quite awesome because of the linking 'n' :D

Actually Rosey, I have too so it has :P Snoink told me to contact Nate and he had no problem deleting one of them.