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LooneyPandaxx

  • Romantic Novels Re: When We Grow Up - Chapter One

    hi LooneyPandaxx here! i really liked first paragraph because it was really intreeging and i wanted to read more. the only problem was that the sentences wer too long, you ...

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Bloom

    hi! LooneyPandaxx here! i thought this piece was sad but totaly perfect! you could make it into a novel aswell. i think its really nice and it touched me inside. ...

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Raw

    at first i thought i thought the punctuation needed work but in the end i realised why you decided to let it go and not use it. i thought the ...

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: You don't care

    hiyya LooneyPandaxx here!!! i really liked your song i thought it had quite a lot of feeling in it and this might be good as song ideas for the future! ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sing

    hiyya its LooneyPanda here!!! i loved your poem. there was good emotion in it and it was quite true as i do sometimes sing myself! :D

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Broken

    hi LooneyPandaxx here!!! OMG this piece is AWESOME it touched my heart and almost made me cry, it was moving. I loved it!!!

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Music is Freedom

    I really liked this piece as a hopeful music artist and thought the words really came from the heart. i thought there were no bad points to it! Its AWESOME!!! ...

    Aug 24, 2011


My tongue must tell the anger of my heart, or else my heart, concealing it, will break...
— Katherine, The Taming of the Shrew