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Just passing through... I noticed this when I was glancing over at who was online... strong Joe, who had lived well into his tens, Ten is one number, there can't ...

this was cute, but something that killed the image for me was: The only thing that wasn't totaled was the purple coat in the trunk. Totaled doesn't belong there. It ...

So, you're saying it's wrong to complain? But your post was a complaint. You wouldn't be a little hypocritical, would you?

9/10 hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha that is so cute!!

**pretends she got the joke** Hello

Hello.

Lol, that's a cute post, Snoink. About two years ago my granddad died, so, in the theme of the mood, I decided to write about what happened. A year later ...

thanks Flemzo and Gadi As for you, Andrew... how the hell could you assume "Kyle" is a girl with all the references to him being a "him"??

There you go **giggles at the self-promotion**

Lesbians...? I don't know where you got "Lesbians" from, since Hayley is the only girl in the piece...

ha-ha. I randomly wrote this. Inspired by the lovely weather and the song I was listening to. Love to know how dodgy it is... Part 1 They lay sprawled out ...

Critique time! **cracks knuckles** There's something I notice in almost everything you write. The lack of the capitals. Sentence by sentence... Jack pulled the black velvet heart shaped box out ...

7/10 Its cute

4/10 it freaks me out