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  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Green

    you didn't actually review the work. You just asked AI to explain what the text was about, then copied that over. If this is a recurring issue with you, stop ...

    Oct 21
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Green

    Did you feed my piece through chatgpt? what happened here?

    Oct 21
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: my life story

    Psst. You might want to put a trigger warning at the start of this piece ;)

    Mar 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: LOVE

    Okay. You asked me to review this, so here I am. The first thing I want to say is this: Have you been through and read over this? There are ...

    Mar 7, 2013
  • Other » Literature, Other Re: A riddle for you - What am I?

    I feel like this riddle has too many possible answers, so it's not really challenging as much as it's a matter of guessing the right one. For instance, in the ...

    Feb 23, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Wisdomatch - Chapter Two

    I have to disagree with you on the "clutching my chest" remark. It IS possible to clutch your chest (actresses do it all the time) and it reads much smoother ...

    Feb 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I call suicide hotlines for the conversation, so tell me something about myself

    "gonna" is a colloquialism. The use of it, not unlike that of "Wanna" is designed to set the tone of a piece. It's the same way someone might say "hey" ...

    Nov 25, 2012
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: -Title Undecided-

    I wouldn't submit this to a competition if you've posted it online. You don't know they won't run it through a program (as my university does) to see if you've ...

    Mar 1, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Trianlge Effect

    This was cute, but there was one error that really stood out to me. "Okay" is two syllables, not one. Ahhh, I'm glad I got that off my chest. Happy ...

    Dec 20, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: In the beginning. ( This is just a first phase of a piece)

    Generally, I like it. Though there isn't much here to dislike...

    Dec 11, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Sparrows

    Thanks to the both of you. I really wanted to get some opinions on this piece since all my teacher said was "Excellent", but I blame the fact that she ...

    Jun 13, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: To Whisper Your Name

    Sorry about the tummy sentence. I've changed it now. I was just in a hurry to get the last bit done that I let my speech take over my writing. ...

    May 26, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: To Whisper Your Name

    They had videos in the 20s? Perhaps you should just check. Yes, they did. The things you learn doing History.

    May 24, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Oh, Corrie 1

    I was just reading through this to find quotes for my fake blurb when I came across something... I noticed her door was slightly ajar. Out of pure concern, I ...

    Mar 29, 2008
  • Other » General, General Re: A Conversation

    Haha. Co-written dialogue at its zaniest. Well done you two.

    Mar 27, 2008


I never travel without my diary. One should always have something sensational to read in the train.
— Oscar Wilde, The Importance of Being Earnest