Lorrilrakest.

"Spaceships? Nonsense, young boy! Stop reaching for the stars or your arms will get tired!" - Tiberius Black "What would you do if your best friend tried to kiss you?"

Ace Markaa is too harsh - terribly too harsh. It's not a bad piece at all! I remember the first one which was good - but boring and uninteresting until ...

Why is it called Wallpaper btw?

Simply reminds be of two comedic characters in one of those duos.

Ooh, this is pretty interesting - it definitely caught my attention, and i didn't stray my attention. However, nothing particularly happens. Put a little bit more in. --- Lorril. ---

"I suppose the rats are the unsanitary option - and Lionel is coming to an end in his life. So I am sure Lionel would understand - seeing as you're ...

Ok lol. Well if she doesn't save the world, make sure it looks like she's going to succeed - with a band of fighters. I don't know, she just seems ...

I realised the references to Doctor Who (ticking stopwatch ... hmm ... lol) But yes, it is a very good, well thought-out concept. Er ... the circus is very random. ...

Oh i am cynical when it comes to this - i either think a piece is really good or really rubbish. I won't post stuff like that any more though ...

This was written so late, with me being very tired. It sucks, but it might be better. It's going to be part of a series of shorts called Peruvian Magic, ...

This is a similar activity to the What Would You Do? but .. You answer in role of your character XD And then ask another question. If you can't really ...

Pay people to guffaw at me. What would you do if the Internet ceased to exist :O

Oh my, write more please :) Everything's really been said, but please do write more of this whole world. Really good absurdist fiction coming along!

I'm asking here again, what gender is this guy?

It's ok, I suppose. Some more work could be put into it. First of all, I think you go too deep into the character's history too soon. It's the prologue, ...