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Lorrilrakest.

  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: The Virus - 1

    I really do agree with nearly all the points Conrad made, it's very unbelievable that this seventeen year old is hiking across countries etc etc. However, I think you could ...

    Sep 6, 2009
  • Research Archives Re: Psychics

    Oooh wow - very in depth there :) Thanks :) Yeh, that would be great :)

    Sep 6, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: The Wooden Stick Challenge

    I would see which parts of my body i could balance it on. I may try that right now. You should too. XD

    Sep 5, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: Short Project

    Im not hoping to spend loads of time on it, but i was experimenting with ideas, as you do, and I came across this one. It's an alteration of the ...

    Sep 4, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: My Latest Attempt At A Novel

    I'd read it. It sounds very interesting - mainly because of the three aspects of it all. But yes, do write it - it sounds like a unique and intriguing ...

    Sep 4, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Fine, just Fine

    Very well written. It wasn't too emotional, neither too comical and insensitive. Like MRDR said, there's a great balance. I also wonder if we can learn more about the Father, ...

    Sep 4, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: What does this username make you think of?

    A Japanese model - who lives in an apartment in the city with a bunch of other girls.

    Sep 4, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The (True) Story of Hansel and Gretel : Intro

    Very interesting stuff :D :D I know people are saying to solidify it in reality, but I think otherwise. I think it should be a fun, maybe Burton-esque, absurdist fiction. ...

    Sep 4, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: What does this username make you think of?

    A teacher, a once noble and do-going citizen, but has become corrupt under the stress of children and that pressure of the parent alliance. Lorrilrakest.

    Sep 4, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: Making some changes to my new Storyline. [any good?]

    An interesting idea to be honest. I felt for Avery when she was writing "her story". The characters a bit naff. It's almost too cliche. Corey McDaniels ... please? It's ...

    Sep 3, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: My New Book Ideas. (WHich do you think?)

    Definitely the second idea is my preference. Maybe if you feel passionate about both of them, you could mix them. Maybe the "Cult" is actually the Angels. And the girl ...

    Sep 3, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: Is this a cool idea?

    It's a very intriguing idea! But maybe, if its not too much work, you should link them all together. So subtle hints that something Universal is going to happen ... ...

    Sep 3, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: What kind of title draws you in?

    I usually like one word titles. The snappy ones that make you think.

    Sep 3, 2009
  • Research Archives Re: Psychics

    Im writing a novel about a whole race of psychics. Not as in shawls and crystal balls - but like real people with supernatural talents. Anybody know of, or even ...

    Sep 3, 2009
  • Research Re: Would anyone like to fill out a questionnaire??

    If i'm too late, fine, but if you ever need anyone else - im here :)

    Sep 3, 2009


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