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Is it an explicit writing? I'm sure you can experiment with the whole "electrically charged fun" aspect. Maybe when he loses control of his emotions he creates black outs, he ...

Are you wanting completely odd stuff with no reasonable explanation ... Or odd stuff that people are pretty sure they know what it is, but there are always conspiracies. I'm ...

Oh My! I realised i had this, like ages ago, and forgot the name because it wasn't really that important. Yeh, i did all the tests and stuff and i ...

Get Fantastic Beasts and Where To Find Them by JK. I know copywright and such - but she used ALOT from old folklore and myths and stuff. Have a read ...

I'm pretty sure it's different in each case. I wouldn't judge one case and use it as research for your own.

Don't know anything or experienced it myself. But the only "experience", i suppose, is from watching Heroes. There's a character(s) called Niki who has her dead sister in her persona, ...

I think i really need to read some of these Anne Rice books! I think i'm writing a vampire novel, although the reason i was hesitant was because of the ...

Well i suppose i like the idea of naturally being a "vegetarian". But maybe call it a different name. People know Vegeterian Vampires have been done several times before and ...

It seems like a romance story, but one half is an abuser. No idea why - just at first glance. I wouldn't read it because i rarely like romance stuff. ...

Crop Circles D:

I was so absorbed in the story half-way through that I forgot to be looking for mistakes and inconsistencies. But hey, I suppose it's a good thing. I'm not sure ...

This is a very intriguing piece of writing :) It's pretty unique, and also very simple. I'm definitely excited about the other chapters, because I'm very much interested in the ...

Hi. Well, as Master_Yoda said, I do agree about the general plot being done before - and if it's the first paragraph then obviously that's not a very good impression ...