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Re: Walking Home
This is the very extent of the social experience of advanced education. I applaud you for taking the time to write it. Yes it is a very long piece, a ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: A long day
Day after day Year after year, I spend all my time Sitting right here. Waiting for the moment When it all goes away, I never knew one could feel this ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Begin!
Yup, thats a poem alright. The start sounds lyrical Very dramatic I can't get past the topic though.
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Hands full of Heart-beats.
This grabbed my attention, it was well planned and It was easy to keep reading. I like this. It had a certain relevance, all the visual referrence, comparing to a ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: I think I'm a little too.
Abrassive for this kind of forum ^^; Figure I should leave while everyone doesn't completely hate my guts :D
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Peace Poster Montage
A couple of photo's I took for a Peace Tour poster I was comissioned for. Can't say which though.
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Die by the Gun
Not my cup of tea - I find that it is a an elaborate idea, that will require alot of hammering. Do not let this sway you, as I forsee ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Hello.
Greetings and salutations! I hope to be a positive addition to this writing community! Please don't point out how I double space! I have in my possession a sticky keyboard ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Hello.
Are there any you want me to read in particular? Beyond that, Danke (Thank you) Bitte sehr. Sprechen sie Deutsch? -Sea- Ja, das tue ich. Obwohl nur sehr wenig, ist ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: The Sketchpad
Thank you.
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Cry Sweet Child
woah, It has a nice rythm, nice flow The message is, how do I say this, Beautiful? Touching at the least. Its not pretending to be an epic, this is ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: I need help.
Its not exactly obvious, but I really don't know my way around a piece of paper. Most of my writing and poetry is just, something that pops into my head. ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Never keep a pet monster
Stand aside Dr.Seuss! This is a nice poem, it deserves to be told in schools, and care facilities everywhere I have no bad words or suggestions other than keep on ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Tell a joke
A girl once said "Talk dirty to me." so I looked her in the eye and said "Socks." So a string walked into a bar, and the bartender told him ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Rambling
That is indeed deep However when I read it, its kind of.... Klunky? It has a definitive flow, however its a forced flow? In no way to take from the ...
Oct 11, 2011