LostMoment

Wow! This is so good! I loved the originality to it and how it begins. I honestly can't think of any ways you can improve it...

Aw, glad you liked it! Okay, yeah I do kind of understand you, I'll keep that in mind when I next post a poem! Thanks :')

Arw thanks for the advice!! I will keep that in mind for future poems, and I actually see where you're coming from and I agree!

Wow, thankyou so much! I'm also glad people can relate to it, that's what I was hoping would happen, but I wasn't sure! Thanks again! :)

That's really good! I love how you end it by just saying one simple word, yet it sounds so powerful! I love the descriptiveness of it all aswell, well done ...