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haha! 6/10 *is easily amused by flippy things* :shock: cool

:cries tears of joy: Nic you're such a sweetheart! *hugs and kisses* But don't think that just because I started swooning, you get a sugar-coated crit. :wink: Hehe! I agree ...

Hiya Libby!!! I really enjoyed this, first off, so I'm gonna crit this sentence by sentence so it can get better. kk? kk. The room became dark as the candles ...

I disagree with Baroness Ink, I thought this made perfect sense and it was very enjoyable. Even before you SAID that it's one of those poems that you read in ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS (how original)!! lol I'm Rosaleah, but I go by Rose and Leah as well. See you around!! -Leah

Welcome, Jake! Yay for the weirdos!!! *waves flag* w00t! hehe -Rosaleah

Hello Alexis!! :D Welcome to YWS. I like your signature too. It sounds like something she'd say. :wink: :D Teehee! Agreeing with kk, I too like your avatar. BUBBLES RULES!! ...

:D :D I agree with Writersdomain! Jacques is very charismatic and an excellent character. He's got that very special spunk that I am already beginning to love. :wink: Brilliant! I ...

:shock: There's more, isn't there?? OMG. I didn't see "#12" at all. It just...missed me. I was trying to go through the whole list of people who just posted stories ...

Bonjour nuttychooky! *Firstly: I will start off by saying that I enjoyed this a lot. It's very imaginative and I could picture it all!* Now, time for the in-depth crit: ...

Hello Baroness, :D *Let me start off by saying that I enjoyed your piece very much. The idea of the Negative and the sun burning Time was a very clever ...

I very much enjoyed this piece. Normally, I would have given you a nice juicy crit, but it seems that Mad and ChurlishLassy have stolen my words, therefore I shan't ...

Hello there, Storm. :) :idea: This was well done, the idea and all, but you don't have it structured correctly. :idea: Here is what I noticed while reading: (1) :!: ...