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I posted chapters 4-5.

Thanks for the review! I expanded on a few things like Noelle and Emily's friendship and I added detail and description. Also, the story continues in Chapters 4-5

I edited the story a little and fixed the paragraph thing that got messed up when I copied it from my computer to YWS. Do you see anything else that ...

OMG!!! That is amazing. Please continue writing this book. I have actually wondered before what would happen if this really did happen. Great job for actually writing something about it. ...

This poem is very good. I enjoyed how the narrator wanted to know what others are thinking just like it sometimes happens in real life. It seems like the typical ...