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Re: Forgotten Promises- prologue
This is a good prologue. I think the grammar needs to be looked over again but it seems very interesting so far. However, I think you should elaborate a bit ...
Feb 9, 2013 -
Re: Meeting each other
TO start, it's an interesting story line but so very cliche. A pretty girl is not pretty enough to be a popular so she gets made fun of. I think ...
Feb 9, 2013 -
Re: Michael
Thank you, like I said it hadn't been proofread so I am very shocked that you didn't find my errors. I definitely appreciate it though. I'll post chapter two soon!
Feb 9, 2013 -
Re: Michael
Thank you for the input. I was actually planning on Brooklyn sorta changing throughout the story, as you'll probably see. And the skiing thing, well, I am originally from near ...
Feb 9, 2013