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Lulu99

  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re:

    Awwwww, this is so sweet. I love it. Awesome job. Really.

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Thirst: Beginning *Edited

    I really like your descriptions. The story is very grabbing. Awesome job.

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Halloween

    I liked it. But some more details/imagery can go a long way. But I did enjoy reading it. :)

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Can't Leave

    Oh my gosh, that's so sad. Brilliant job. Really, excellent. I was tearing up. I love it when people absolutely love their pets.

    Oct 30, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Two Worlds Collide - Chapter 2

    I love this. This is the first part I have read and I no idea of what's going on but I want to read on. Great job!

    Oct 30, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The story of Pegasus

    It's not so bad. If anthing its really creative. Don't take this offensively, but "my little pony" 's song was playing in my head as I read definately put a ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Blue Rose

    Thank you guys. Yeah, I know about the imagery. I just wanted to know how people would like the very basic outline. It's my first posting ever. I would try ...

    Oct 9, 2011


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien